The root of your writing while sounding agreeable in the beginning, did not settle very well with me personally after some time. Somewhere within the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer untnlfuoatery only for a very short while. I still have a problem with your jumps in assumptions and you might do well to help fill in all those gaps. In the event that you actually can accomplish that, I could certainly be amazed.
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